skjaindoha
Abhipray and Monisha become parents of a baby girl
updated 706 days ago
Age: 66
Hometown: GHAZIABAD,INDIA
About me:
A MUSIC LOVER AND FREELANCER POET,WHO BREATHS THE MUSIC,now enjoying retired engineer life... I HAVE A BEAUTIFUL WIFE...  [ more ]
CHAND KI AANKHON MEN AANSOO DEKHE TO MAIN BHI RO PADA-Written,Composed and sang by Sushil Kumar Jain
Sushil Kumar Jain working in Doha-Qatar
Listens 174    Comments 30    
Recorded: 02/19/2009
Notes: Hi My Midomi Music Lovers,Friends and Fans and Great Admirers and Evaluators !!! This song I wrote on 14th February 2009 at 5.30 PM. Ya !!! On Valentine day !!! Why so sad song written ? Because I remembered our dear "CHAND"...her Midomi ID has a picture of "Weeping Moon "!!! It has pinched in to my soft poet heart...This condition of Chand...Intolerable to me !!!! The pen and paper i pickedup and saw towards Lord Krishna !!! my heart cried...Why its happening my Lord !!! and the result is a beautiful Nazm,song !!! So devoted to Our Lord Allmighty Krishna and my Guru Hanuman !!! Dedicated to our lovely friend and my midomi dot CHAND and my wife Manju Jain,children ANKUR,AKANKSHA and ABHIPRAY !!! and further to all my Midomi dots ,Friends and Fans ...Yes ...YOU ALL !!!! May God keep all of us Happy,Healthy,Knowledgeful,Bhaktimay and Sukhi !!!! Your lovely comments I would await eagerly !!!! So Let's Enjoy this song !!! चाँद की आँखों में आंसू देखे तो मैं भी रो पड़ा , एक क़तरा खून का आँखों से मेरी , गालों से बह कर गिर पड़ा ! क्या था जिसने चाँद को इस क़दर ग़म ज़दा किया , सोच कर दिल रंज से मेरा भी कुछ रिसने लगा ! टिश्यू पेपर चाँद तक पहुंचाऊं मैं कैसे भला , कुछ दिल मेरा ऐसा किया, उड़ जाऊं खुद और जा मिलूं !... चाँद तो है चाँद रातों को तो लगता है भला , लोग क्यों जानें ,चाँद के घावों का किसको फ़िक्र है !.... दिल के छालों पर तेरे ए चाँद मरहम दूँ लगा , हो न औरों को सही मुझको तो तेरा फ़िक्र है !.... घाव तेरे सबको दिखते ध्यान पर जाता नहीं लोग कहते दाग हैं कितने हैं बेपरवा सभी ! फ़िक्र कर मत चाँद तेरे हुमसुख़न ऐसे भी हैं जो मिलेंगे जा के तुझसे दुःख मिटाने के लिए !..... चाहे खुद को दें मिटा ,तुझसे मिलेंगे हम ज़रूर चाँद की चाहत में जाने क्या से क्या कर जाएंगे !...... रचयिता : सुशिल कुमार जैन , १४ फरवरी २००९ , ५.३० बजे शाम , दोहा -क़तर
Comments
bahut achcaa likha hai aap ne dear
uncle. aur gaya bhi bahut achcha hai.
Posted by R_RATRA on 03/03/2009.
bahut achcaa likha mai aap ne dear
uncle. aur gaya bhi bahut achcha hai.
Posted by R_RATRA on 03/03/2009.
Wow !!!
My Lovely and talented midomi son !!
Thanks a lot..for your lovely 2
comments !!!
Bahut din se naheen dekha tumhen...ek
song bhejo bhai !!! My Ankur's Copy !!!
Loves and flowers of blessings are
stored and sending 1/8 th !!!! Why ?
Becaz rest are reserved for your
lovely-2 rendition!!!
Posted by skjaindoha on 03/03/2009.
Beti !!! Tum great Ho !!!Apne papaji ke
dil ka haal samjhti ho !!! Enjoy your 20
days holiday out satation trip !!!
Baaki jo kahna hai tumhen private mail
men likhoonga ...!!! Thoda natkhat
baaten karne ka mood hai...baap aur beti
ke beech ki baaten hain na !!!
Tumhara message padh kar kitna khush
hua kah naheen sakta !!!!
Loves to my dot !!!
Papaji
Posted by skjaindoha on 02/23/2009.
very very nice.... and u hve done it
superbly sirji.... kya khoob likha
hai.......very nice jain uncle... aap ko
mera pranam....... u r a gr8
artist.....starz unlimiteddddddd
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************************* jee
Posted by kodax4 on 02/21/2009.
HAPPY NEW YEAR 2010 TO MY LOVELY SON
KODAX4=JEEVAN !!!
I AM REVIEWING MY RECORDINGS TODAY AND
FOUNDBY MISTAKE I HAVE NOT REPLIED YOUR
VALUABLE AND LOVELY APPRECIATION !!!
MY SON , YOU ARE AN INTELLIGENT MAN AND
SHALL UNDERSTAND THE HUMAN ERROR !!!
THNKS FOR THE LOVE AND RESPECT AND THE
GOLDEN WORDS !!! KHUSH RAHO AUR
KHUSHIYON SE BHARA KOYI SONG POST KARO
!!!!!
JAIN UNCLE
Posted by skjaindoha on 01/06/2010.
Your soul is love and music dear
skjaindoha,my admiration for you :)
STARS *****
BIG HUG!!
Posted by pagarvi on 02/21/2009.
HAPPY NEW YEAR WISHES TO MY LOVELY SOUL
DEAR DOT PAGARVI !!!!!
MAY GOD KEEP YOU HAPPY, HEALTHY AND
WEALTHY .
PL KEEP ON SINGING AND LIKING THE
POETRY AND MUSIC.
MY BLESSINGS DOT !!!!!GREAT HUGS !!!!!
S.K.JAIN FROM DOHA / JAIN UNCLE
Posted by skjaindoha on 01/06/2010.
good job !! i enjoy your voice
im so sory that i cant anderstand lyric
Posted by johnlennon on 02/20/2009.
Thank you so much sir !!! I would
translate it and shall attch to this
song for your full enjoyment !!!!
I need one day more !!!
actually whenever i post a song..2-3
days remain very much busy to reply to
my friends and fans !!!
I am Honoured to get a friend like you
!!!
Regards
Jain bro
Posted by skjaindoha on 02/21/2009.
Translation :
Title and Line 1:
I wept(bitterly)..after seeing the
tears in the eyes of Moon !!!
Stanza 1 - Line 1 -same as title
Line 2-One drop of blood dropped from
my eyes sliding through my cheeks !!!!
Stanza 2 : Line 1-
what happened which troubled the Moon
so much...(and made her so sad)...
Line 2- thinking this...my heart became
so sad..something started leaking from
my heart !!!!
Stanza 3: Line 1 and 2-
How to send the tissue paper to Moon..
Line 3- Alas !!!could I fly and meet
her..
Line 4-my heart felt such.. something
(like this)....
Stanza 3- Line 1 -
Moon is after all Moon
Line 2- It looks so lovely in the
nights .
Line 3- why people should know..
Line 4- Who cares (her) wounds of
Moon...!!!
Stanza 4- Line 1 and 2-
O Moon !!! let me apply an ointment on
the wounds of thou heart...
Line 3-whether others care or not...
Line 4- atleast I worry for you(I care
for you)...
Posted by skjaindoha on 02/23/2009.
Stanza 5- Line 1-(O my Moon !!)
Thou wounds are visible to all !!!!
Line 2- But but people donot
realize...(even they do not sense)
Line 3- people call them spots !!!
Line 4- How much careless are all
!!!!!
Stanza 6-Line 1-
O my Moon !!! Donot worry at all ..
Line 2- Still some care takers of you
are...
Line 3- who would meet you sure...
Line 4- To remove( and
finish...eleminate )thou sorrows !!!
Stanza 7- Line 1-
(WE)will not bother even to sacrice
ourselves ..( for you)
LINE 2- WE WILL SURELY MEET YOU...
Line 3- In the love of Moon...
Line 4- To what extent we will reach
and what...we will do.(we donot
know)..!!!!
PL.ENJOY FULLY MR. JOHN LENNON
regards
Posted by skjaindoha on 02/23/2009.
thank you very much for the translation

very apreciat


John S
Posted by johnlennon on 02/24/2009.
Bohut achchaa likhaa aapnay ... kaash
Chaand sun leti lekin woh kitni
dooooooor baithi hai usay suanayein toh
sunaayein kaise !!
Posted by indraneel on 02/20/2009.
sahab dil ki aawaz hai...pahunch hi
jayegi ..aj kal electronic yug
hai...sanjay would send her !!! naheen
to aawaz aa kar sun lengi wo !!!
recorded hai na ..20 days are not much
...log baag to taumra intezaar karte
hain...!!!
Posted by skjaindoha on 02/21/2009.
Aapki shaayri ko bahut pyaar bhara
salaam .... you are really
awesome......kamaal ka likte hai ...
expression is superb!!!!
Posted by Sarita2012 on 02/20/2009.
Shukriya...!!!Salam !!!
ek taza tareen sher pesh karta hoon
huzoor ke liye...Irshad hai ki...
" Aap ki nazron men maine ,pyar ki
dekhi mahak. wo mahak aisee bhali, dil
khil utha ya rab mera !!!"
Bas aap tareef karte rahen aur jain
uncle sher par sher likhte rahenge...!!!
ye jain uncle ka apni style hai bhai
!!!
Jeeti raho !!! Meri gunawaan
beti..gunon ki parkhi beti !!!mujhe
chnad ki bahut fikra ho rahi hai...theek
to hai wo ?I mean tabiyat wagairah
nasaaz to nahin uski...!!! Ishwar se
prarthna hai meri masoom bachhi ko
salamt rakhe !!!
jain uncle/papaji
Posted by skjaindoha on 02/20/2009.
Sarita ke pyar bhare izhar ko Salam !!!
Beti ki shayri aj poore din dil-o-dimag
par chhayi rahi !!!
Itni tareef se dil kukdookoon ho raha
hai...!!!! beti sab tumhaari duaon ka
fal hai ..varna hum to wohi ..jain saheb
hain jinko zamane ne bahut sataya aur aj
bhi sata raha hai...!!!
Practice makes perfect ,
abhi to main apni manzil se bahut door
hoon beti..."Ranjish hi sahi...."jaisa
kuchh likhne ki tamanna hai...jis din
aisa likh paoonga ...us din kuchh kabil
samjhoonga apne aap ko !!!
Posted by skjaindoha on 02/20/2009.
Bahut khoob... Hum kahan bhala sooraj ko
roshni dikha sakte hein!!!!
Thanks for your blessing and he is fine
now ...back to school!!!!
Posted by Sarita2012 on 02/20/2009.
beti thanks for this Honour !!! I feel
Humbled by receiving this Honour !!! And
your love and blessings worked for
Abhipray !! ya he is enjoying as usual
his classes as well movie today !!! I
had chat with him in morning !!! you
will see him again on midomi.
Ek khabar aur doon...maine song poora
kar liya jo dhun tumne dee thi usmen hi
." Rokna chaha main ,laakhon,dil nahin
mana magar.Hasraten ankhon se aakhir,Ah
ban kar bah gayin..." 6 stanzas
created.
its too late to record...kal kar doonga
sure..11 PM ho raha hai.subah office bhi
jana hai...kafi busy schedule hai !!
Papaji
Posted by skjaindoha on 02/20/2009.
very good composition.bahut khoob likh
rahe hain aaj kal aap papaji
Posted by sanjayagra on 02/20/2009.
sab tumhare pyar ka nasha hai jo mujhe
peene ke liye mila...!!! ab nashe men
kya -2 likhoonga mujhe bhi nahin pata
hai !!!
just cutting joke..
shabash mere pyare bachche !!! shayar
to shayar hai...uska dekhne ka aur
samjhne ka nazariya alag hi hota
hai..!!!! Tabhi to logbag uski baat ko
sunte hain aur daad dete hain...!!!
Tumhaari kalam ka jadoo chalne wala
hai...janta hoon..hasraten umad-ghumad
kar rahi hain...hai na ? chalo to fir ho
jaye ..kuchh tadakta aur fadakta
sa..!!!! shayri ka tumko bhi shauk hai
aur gunawaan bhi ho !!!
Chand ke comments ka intezaar hai mujhe
besabri se...!!! pata nahin kya kar rahi
hai ye ladki ...imtehaan le rahi hai
mera ..ya...fir kaheen naraz to nahin ho
gayi...itni laparwah aur nasamjh to
nahin apni aur humsab ki Chand !!!! beta
jara samjhao to usko aur jaroorat pade
to mna bhi lo...!!! Dil tadap raha
hai..uske liye !!!
kya karoon ?
Loves my son !!!
Papaji
Posted by skjaindoha on 02/20/2009.
very well done uncle.nice dedication
.
Posted by shrini76 on 02/20/2009.
Thank you my lovely midomi son !! I am
Honoured !!
Posted by skjaindoha on 02/20/2009.
zarra nawazi ke liye shukriya !!! my
midomi son !!!Thanks and many -2 thanks
!!!
Loves
Posted by skjaindoha on 02/20/2009.
good work done,,jain sahab,,,accha
laga,,,
Posted by mahmoodhaf on 02/19/2009.
Thank you Sir !!! Thanks a lot for
appreciation and support.
"Hamsukhan" theek hai na !!! I have
doubt in its pronunciation..and
use.!!Kindly clarify.
Jain bro
Posted by skjaindoha on 02/20/2009.
ha ha HA HA HAHAH !!!
"TISSUE PAPER "PAR HANSI AA GAYI NA
!!!
Beti truely speaking ,that moment this
feeling came !!! Our chand is really
very sweet soul !!!
some time I feel to please her...!!!her
dad is no more..she remains sad becaz of
her job !!! its her great personality
that she still finds the way to live
happily.
She is very intelligent and soft kind
hearted girl !!! Beti mera bas chale to
truely us tak ud kar jaa pahunchoon
milne ke liye...only I need a rocket
which runs by solar energy and/or wind
energy.if Our scientists and NASA
engineers could provide me free of cost
!!! naheen to pawan putra Hanumanji ka
sahara lena padega !!! Tum sab se milne
ka jee karta hai...itne pyare bachche ho
mere midomi ke !!!!
Posted by skjaindoha on 02/20/2009.
Hey !!! Vishnu bhakt Divya...aj meri
khair naheen ...agar chand ne padha aur
kaheen galat samjh liya.. to meri chand
par bache khuche baal bhi gayab kar
degi...I am awaiting her
comments..bhagwaan sandle na aa tapke
!!!
prabhu bachao !!!!
Enjoy my dot...how intelligently I
imagined and wrote the poem...you have
noted ...!!!!
Posted by skjaindoha on 02/20/2009.
last stanza ..last line was
incompltetely recorded...so attaching a
voice clip !!!!!
Posted by skjaindoha on 02/19/2009.
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